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ruised And Battered
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That night as Susie lay sore and utterly devastated on a thick mattress on the floor, I
made her promise she would never ever consider going back to her abusive husband.

"We'll find you a good job, a good home...  and maybe, even a good husband.  One who
will not beat you up like you're some kind of punch bag for his pent-up frustrations!"

Susie was quiet, too quiet.  She was staring at the ceiling and in a world of her own.  So,
I tried calling her back to reality fearing that if I did not do so quickly enough she would
get lost in that world and its craziness.

"Susie!"  I said then raised myself up onto my elbows to have a better look at her with

that strange faraway expression on her face.

"Yes, Ta.  I heard you.  And, I promise."  She said
softly as she rolled over to face away
from me as if she was surrendering to sleep at last.  But, she could not fool me.  Susie,
sweet vulnerable Susie, was never a good pretender although in her happier younger days
she, high-spirited then, had often gushed about one day becoming a famous movie star.

"Just like those Bollywood screen goddesses laughing happily as they run in and out of the

trees and bushes!" she had giggled excitedly.  How time has changed her!  She could smile
from one ear to the other but when she was hurting it was apparent to everyone.   It was
those eyes of hers.  Like an open book, they told so many tales.  And, lately, they were
sad ones.  Over the years, her eyes seemed to have lost their shine, their search for love
and happiness, their zest for life.

That night I tried very hard to sleep.  And I finally did, just before daybreak, after listening to

her muffled sobs all through the quiet night.  I suspected she was once again thinking back
to those days when Bobby, her college sweetheart was alive.  Kind and gentle, he had
always been there to protect and care for her until the fateful day of his fatal car accident…

No sooner had I found some sleep, I felt the sunlight streaming through my window and onto

my face.  With a start I jumped out of my bed thinking that I had overslept and was going to
be late for work.  Then I realized that it was a Saturday.  And, then I remembered Susie.
But, she was not there on the floor mattress nor anywhere in the flat.  As before, she had
disappeared quietly in the early hours of morning without saying goodbye.  She was, I
suspected, too ashamed to look anyone in the eye so she had sneaked off way before the
rest of us were up and about.

Disappointed, I dropped myself onto the bed then felt overcome with sadness.  Sad that

Susie had, once again, gone back to her habitually drunk and wife-battering husband.  Sad
that Susie had promised to be strong but yet again failed herself, yes herself, not me nor
any of her other friends, but herself.  I was sad, very sad, that she had obviously
succumbed once again to what she kept insisting was her fate...